“Oh NO!” I shouted sadly.
A great calamity!
A terrible disaster!
A rotten tragedy!
I felt my fingers clenching,
My shoulders slumping down.
Oh, how could this have happened?
My smile became a frown.
“What’s wrong?” my buddy asked me.
“Is everything alright?”
I shook my head quite sadly.
No, things weren’t looking bright.
“Oh something shocking’s happened,
It’s terrible, you see, …”
…
(Can you finish this poem? 😂😀😛)
I am losing my mind
Running round and round
I fail to see
What’s in front of me
I searched high and low
Far and wide, up and below
Till I stood in front of looking glass
To see perched on my head, my reading glass
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Ha! Shalini! Brilliant! 😂
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Hehehe not your calibre, an attempt…
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Ah but yours… it perfectly captures something that spectacled people everywhere can identify with! 🤗🤓
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Hahaha just an attempt
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An impromptu one
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This is all I could think of as it happened just now.
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My heart was thumping
My hands were shivering
Lips cracking and
Mouth dry
My head was hot
I am draining
A brain drain!
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Ha! This is superb. Also perfectly describes my Mondays 😂
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“My girlfriend’s invited me to her wedding,
And the groom isn’t me”
😉
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Bahahahaha Diana. That’s fantastic 😂
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This poem’s almost finished
And I’m completely out of rhymes
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Brilliant 😂
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… I’m trying to write a Haiku
With lines that number three;
But, I’ve lost the plot
So much more I’ve got,
I hate this poetry.
I’ll have to call it something else,
’free-writing’ if you like,
’cause it sure ain’t no darn Haiku,
and it sure can take a hike!”
My buddy looked at me aghast,
he saw my fevered brow,
he realised the pain I wore,
and told me that it wouldn’t last,
explained the why and how,
and then explained some more.
He tried to help me with my woes;
but, by this time, I felt such despair
that, from my head down to my toes,
I really couldn’t care.
So he slapped me, short, sharp and quick –
that certainly did the trick.
G:)
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Oh my goodness, this is transcendent 😂
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I thought i’d just give it a try and see what a curd. G:)
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I’m cosy in my sleeping bag
But now I have to pee. 😂
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Oh my gosh 😂 I can totally see me having a proper tantrum over that! Hilarious!!!
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I made a lovely castle
Which was swallowed by the sea!
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Oh no! 😂
Lovely ending, Julie 😊
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I love a challenge! I had to try to improve on the first effort. How about –
I’ve watched the film from start to end – They’ve cut the scenes that feature me!
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That one’s great too 😂 well done!
(I like them both, they rhyme so well,
I find your tries sublimely swell!)
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My bum is all swollen, red and itchy
For I have been bitten by Lorraine’s flea.
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Oh my gosh this is so meta. I freaking LOVE IT.
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Thank you. Couldn’t resist it. 😀
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There’s an hour left in this great flick,
And, oh my God, I’ve got to pee.
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Bahahaha 😂 Outstanding.
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